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Hi, this is a very detailed article you've got going here, unfortunatly it is not properly sourced and is not in the proper format for this wiki, the article should be written in an encyclopedia format, not the narrative form you have here. And it need's citations, even if the sources are your own material we need to know that you didn't just make it up on the spot. More information can be found in the style manual.-Cpthunt 19:45, 16 December 2008 (UTC)
- Add to what is noted above, there is no wikification or styling in the article either. That needs to be addressed as well before you can remove the copyedit tag. – JayLR 02:04, 17 December 2008 (UTC)