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I think the style of this article is NOW up to standards. However how do you get the sidebar up out of the text?Capohanf 04:31, 10 February 2009 (UTC)
- What do you mean about the sidebar? It's in the same place here as it is on every article. --TimPendragon 04:35, 10 February 2009 (UTC)
- it and the text seem to be run together, is there some way of having the text start lower?4.255.35.30 04:44, 10 February 2009 (UTC)
- You mean having all the text begin below the sidebar? No. That's why it's a sidebar. Look at any other character, ship or planet article. All the sidebars are in the same place. --TimPendragon 04:56, 10 February 2009 (UTC)
- Oh well. . . if that's the way it is, so be it! --Capohanf 05:05, 10 February 2009 (UTC)
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But why does the line from the subject header go through the side bar box? -- Capohanf 05:16, 10 February 2009 (UTC)
- That looks like a problem on your end; it's not that way for me. What browser are you using? The monobook styles or skins used by Wikia sometimes show up differently depending on which browser you use. It seems fine in Firefox. --TimPendragon 05:18, 10 February 2009 (UTC)
Copyedit note[]
There are still several simple spelling errors in the text, stuff you'll pick out quickly with another read. Grammar needs work, stuff like unnecessary capitalisation of words that are not proper nouns and of entire words throughout the article. You've also linked several words multiple times in the the text, generally a word should only be wikified the first time it appears in the text with all subsequent mentions not linked. – JayLR 05:23, 10 February 2009 (UTC)
- Unless it's an exceptionally long article, like Timothy Sinclair, for example. --TimPendragon 05:30, 10 February 2009 (UTC)