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Okay - I need to remove the bullets, what else?

Added this:

"Prior to being accepted into the Academy, Therav held a variety of jobs. As a child, he worked as an apprentice stablehand, and later, an apprentice zabathu handler. Between fifteen and seventeen, before acceptance into the Academy, he worked as a mounted courier."

I'm making the fanon assumption that the Andorian age of majority is younger than the minimum age for the Academy. I'll add my fanon stuff about the Andorians (such as, why they use mounted couriers when we Americans haven't used them since the 19th century) on the Andorian pages. --GMDreia 01:05, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

The bullet points seem the best way, to me, to organize the hobbies/interests information. I'd like to leave them, unless someone has a better idea? Thanks :) --GMDreia 19:54, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Ooops, that was me, I forgot to log in.

Is it copyedited to anyone's satisfaction? --GMDreia 05:53, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

I just finished a major overhaul of Therav's entry. I cleaned up the style, got things in order, made sure facts were links, and got rid of a lot of stuff that was more old story notes, then the facts associated with him. Is there anything else that needs to be done? Jfromtheoak 12:56, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

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